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The rivalry of Buck and Spitz

   Spitz a rival of Buck. Spitz is a husky that was apart of Francois and Perrault's sledding team. The rivalry between Spitz and Buck was like two lineman on apposing teams at a football game. One time Spitz and Buck started to fight out of nowhere. They both had scars after that one. Francois knew one day that Spitz and Buck would fight to the death and he was hoping that Buck would win. Early the next morning, Francois and Perrault got the dogs together and was sledding to Dawson. But they knew that it was going to be a long and hard journey. As Spitz was walking on the ice and it broke. Spitz and some of the other dogs fell through. Francois and Buck pulled them out the freezing cold water. When they pulled them their body was like an ice cube. But the weather couldn't stop them from gaining some miles.
   Night broke, it was time for the dogs to be fed. As Francois was feeding the other dogs, Spitz and Buck stared to fight again but this time Buck didn't make a mark on Spitz but Spitz had bitten and scratched all over Buck. But the fight got broken up by a team of savage huskies. Even though Buck and Spitz was fighting, they stopped to save the rest of the dogs, Francois and Perrault. Fang after claw the dogs were fighting off the team of huskies. The team of huskies left and the dogs were all banged up.
   The morning came, Francois and Perrault knew that the dogs were hurt but they also knew that they had to make it to Dawson. As they were on their way to Dawson, Francois could see the pain in all his dogs. So after some miles they took a break to let the dogs eat, but Buck saw a snowshoe rabbit. Buck went to go hunt it down, but Buck wasn't the only one to see the rabbit. Spitz had seen the snowshoe rabbit too. Spitz knew a quicker way to cut off the rabbit and Buck. As Spitz took his way, Buck was still following the rabbit. Spitz, zipped out the bush as fast a rocket. The snowshoe rabbit got scared and ran in the bush were Spitz had just came out of. Staring eye to eye are Buck and Spitz all alone. Out of nowhere the fangs of Spitz were in the back of Buck's neck. Spitz taking Buck to the ground, pinning him down. Buck tries to strike but Spitz kept blocking every move. Buck and Spitz going fang to fang cutting the lips of each others mouth open. The rest of the dogs made a circle around the battle between Buck and Spitz. Buck knew that Spitz might can beat him, fighting like wild beast but Buck also knew that if he used his head that Spitz will lose. So using his head, Buck slid under Spitz and bit his left fore leg, breaking it. Then Buck tried to push Spitz over, but Spitz didn't budge. So then Buck slid back under Spitz and bit the other fore leg and broke it. As Spitz was falling to the ground, Buck got on top. The dogs got closer, Buck could feel the air coming from their nose. Buck sank his fangs right through the neck of Spitz. And Buck knowing that he killed his rival. Buck and the other dogs knowing that Spitz is gone. They howl in the remembery of Spitz. All the howling caused Francois and Perrault to come over and see what they were howling about. Francois seen Buck over Spitz with his bloody fangs, howling for the victory. Francois called Buck over and patted him on the head and said, " good dog. You and that Spitz helded y'all rivalry in a fight. Parrault, I told you." Parrault nodding his head in agreement.
   Back on the trail to Dawson. The sled dogs are trying to make but it is hard to make without Spitz. Buck took the lead. Francois knew that they would have to take more stops. Final, they made to Dawson where Francois wanted and need to go. While down in Dawson, Francois got a new dog. And this dog reminded Buck of himself when he was younger and less capable. Francois, Parrult, Buck, and the rest of the sled dogs are back on the trail and going home.

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  1. It seems to be okay with the wording. I like the part where the spitz pulled out the dogs that fell into the water. I did not like the part where the dogs fought or got aggressive. It needs a little more detail on the persuasion side, try to persuade people to read your story. What happened to the dogs while or after fighting? Were the dogs really ice cubes or was that a metaphor? Did you type a lot of metaphors in the passage? It needs more information on the sledding team. Where did the sledding team begin? How did the sledding team compare to the story? What was the main idea of the story? Take your time while typing!

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  2. That is missed spelled, the underlined word is missed spelled he through that he was going to run all over us. Never start a sentence with but. NEVER!!!!!! But the fight got broken up by a team of savage huskies. As fast as a rocket not as fast a rocket. It’s not, make but it is hard to make without Spitz. It’s, make, it but it is hard to make it without Spitz. You really need to PROOFREAD your work before you turn it in because if you care about your grades and you want to succeed in life you have got to be on point with stuff so i think you should PROOFREAD your work.

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